Updated: May 21, 2019
Last week we had a meeting with Jim about the project so far. His priority was that the wording of the script properly represented what he wants to film to depict. We sat together and edited the parts of the script he felt needed changing.
Today I went over feedback we received on the 7th and changed the script where appropriate.
Jim responded with;
With this feedback, I now need to change the script to satisfy the client. This week is the only opportunity for any changes to the script as we are starting to animate, I'm comfortable with having changes to the narration at this point as we haven't confirmed any voice actors.